As We Grow (Worlds Song) (Add To It People) :)
published by mush91 on 29 December, 2010 - 15:45
As we grow in this world of devastating lies
In which we're comforted by the corruption and fail to realise
how many more times are we made to see blindly?
Many More?
No not many more as we realise how blind we've become
but fail to act as we act to wana do more
more for who?
more for me or more for you?
too many questions or too little answers
no! just our eyes closed for to long
we're dreaming of a closed world of just us, our ears closed to the cries of its song.
(add to it people)
create your own verse and continue the poem in the comments 
Comments
12 November 2010
11 months 3 weeks
add to it people dont be shy i thought revival had a bunch of creative people?
The Wisest of Man Is Not The One Who Knows, But The One Who Seeks Knowledge In Order To Perform
if you can get me some chocolate that would be great.
26 November 2010
4 months 1 week
im not gonna go there and embarrass myself, so i wont even try, but at least i read it right???
"Verily, in the remembrance of Allah, do hearts find rest"
12 November 2010
11 months 3 weeks
its not embarassing yourself dude
just join in and you'll see its going to be good at the end lol
The Wisest of Man Is Not The One Who Knows, But The One Who Seeks Knowledge In Order To Perform
if you can get me some chocolate that would be great.
26 November 2010
4 months 1 week
where our voices truly belong, for our time has finally come
allright there u have, just for u .ive tried to keep the rhyme, so all is not lost!
"Verily, in the remembrance of Allah, do hearts find rest"
1 October 2008
4 days 17 hours
This is a poem....
12 November 2010
11 months 3 weeks
whats your point?
The Wisest of Man Is Not The One Who Knows, But The One Who Seeks Knowledge In Order To Perform
if you can get me some chocolate that would be great.
1 October 2008
4 days 17 hours
Although my contributions towards the threads is very little, poems make the situations a tiny bit worse.
12 November 2010
11 months 3 weeks
how? whats so bad about poems? and its not like we're posting it to the world we're just making it for us to see. get it
The Wisest of Man Is Not The One Who Knows, But The One Who Seeks Knowledge In Order To Perform
if you can get me some chocolate that would be great.
12 November 2010
11 months 3 weeks
how? whats so bad about poems? and its not like we're posting it to the world we're just making it for us to see. get it
The Wisest of Man Is Not The One Who Knows, But The One Who Seeks Knowledge In Order To Perform
if you can get me some chocolate that would be great.
1 October 2008
4 days 17 hours
Me + poems = get nowhere.
get it
26 November 2010
4 months 1 week
oh come on s.b.f!
im sure there is a little creative voice within u that i just DYING to contribute to this poem, and its not cos r crazy...so do a Horton and hear a WHO! lol (u need to have seen the film to get tht...)
i should probably be saying something like "if looks could kill!" right?? yh..im gnna go now...
"Verily, in the remembrance of Allah, do hearts find rest"
12 November 2010
11 months 3 weeks
lol i dont get it
lol anywayyyyyyy...:P
joke lol
yeah comeon s.b.f you dont know what your good at trust me we all think we're bad at something but when we try we succeed and it doesnt have to be the best in the world
get it
The Wisest of Man Is Not The One Who Knows, But The One Who Seeks Knowledge In Order To Perform
if you can get me some chocolate that would be great.
1 October 2008
4 days 17 hours
What did I say wrong?
Did I say I was bad at writing poems?
I said I didn't like poems.
Full stop.
24 December 2008
11 hours 7 min
whats the theme of the poem/song. i cant quite pin it and the song doesnt call out to me (too early in the morning?)
also, bolden or colour the actual continuation of the song/poem so we know where it's at.
to colour: [ color = red ] blah blah blah [/ color]
and the blah blah blah should go red (dont put anyspace, duh)
like so blah blah blah
Is it true? Is it kind? Is it necessary?
26 November 2010
4 months 1 week
that is too early, u a morning person?? lucky u!!
though im training myself to be one, seems to be going well (so far lol)
"Verily, in the remembrance of Allah, do hearts find rest"
26 November 2010
4 months 1 week
lol, its a kiddie movie 'Horton hears a Who'. Horton is a elephant, who cos he has bigger ears than the other animals is the only one who can hear the Whos (teeny tiny little people)so everyone thinks hes going loopy...
"Verily, in the remembrance of Allah, do hearts find rest"