God loves me

When I needed money,
He provided me with a job.

When I wanted to waste money,
He provided me with expenses.

When I was tempted,
He provided me with strength.

When those temptations became strong,
He allowed me to stay at home.

When I prayed for the strength to forgive,
He gave me a front seat view on the evils of revenge

Yet with all this I still did not act
or follow all that was commanded of me

God gave me a chance to gain forgiveness and mercy
and He still keeps giving me opportunity
For God loves me.

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Did you write this?

Jihad of the Nafs
(The Struggle of the Soul)

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Yes, it's an original.

I be evil. wooo...

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Aw'h :]

#' It's a good thing tears never show in the pouring rain...
As if a good thing ever could make up for all the pain '#

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Thanks everyone - I had no idea how it would be received.

I was to add that the words are talking about real events and scenarios - not made up with phony events or anything, but real life stuff. (I often find the use of made up events in such things to feel dishonest to me.)

I be evil. wooo...

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Oh...

I just gotta make sure my Performance matches my Ambitions. Now, how do I do that?

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1. Where did you get the idea to write a poem?

2. How long did it take to write?

I liked it Very Happy

"Live as if you were to die tomorrow. Learn as if you were to live forever."
Mahatma Gandhi

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Oh...

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"Live as if you were to die tomorrow. Learn as if you were to live forever."
Mahatma Gandhi

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erm... I was going to write something but this popped up into my head. and like 2 mins I guess.

It wasn't meant to be a poem initially, but then I thought it had a rhyme, broke the lines up and it was there. just had to make a change or two.

In my defence, I was in a good mood.

I be evil. wooo...

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That is totally how some of the poems i write start out!

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God loves me too, are you jealous? Razz

Truth's_Razor this poem is tagged as a contest...you should add yours up here Smile

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Lol, I might just do that!

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Truth's_Razors wrote:
Lol, I might just do that!

i look forward to it Smile

When u point ur finger at someone else there's three fingers pointing back at you...