Found Peace

Salam Alaykum, guys. It's time for another rap. I'd really like you to take the time to read this rap. it's called Found Peace.

When I sank right to my knees
Ordered to submit defeat
Held down by my head
Strap restraining my eyes
All I knew was fear
I knew he was gloating
From death I could be near
Yet he didn’t seem to care
I thought that I was worthless
Imprisoned by the world
Rolled right on the floor
That’s when I dared to dare

But then I stared right into your face
You thought I was still in the race
You stretched your hand out to me
Helping me walk across the sea
For the first time I felt I was strong
I had a place where I could belong
I knew I could breathe and I could smile
I felt the wind brush passed me with ease
Turned the page and I'd found peace

I know this is only the start
The real thing’s gotta come from my heart
But now I feel like I am strong
I can do what’s right and avoid the wrong
Or at least I can try, jump back on my feet
It’s not my wealth that makes me elite
It's the person that makes me sound
Thank God I’ve got no regrets
But I still remember when I was down

Then I stared right into your face
You thought I was still in the race
You stretched your hand out to me
Helping me walk across the sea
For the first time I felt I was strong
I had a place where I could belong
I knew I could breathe and I could smile
I felt the wind brush passed me with ease
Turned the page and I'd found peace

My Journey has only just started
But others are heavy or broken hearted
It’s my duty to help others with decency
Let’s all do away with animosity
I stride down the road with ease
It’s time to share the love of peace

Comments

OK, thanks for your comments. By the way Allah/God isn't the one gloating.
Maybe I could add a bit to the 3rd stanza.
Well, I wrote Found Peace after hearing the new Hero cover. I can't sing so I rap sometimes.
I normally type them, I try to make a story out of the rap. By the way can you give me an example of a SEAL?

“Before death takes away what you are given, give away whatever there is to give.”

Mawlana Jalal ud Din Rumi

The Lamp wrote:
My Journey has only just started
But others are heavy or broken hearted
It’s my duty to help others with decency
Let’s all do away with animosity
I stride down the road with ease
It’s time to share the love of peace

! Smile

"How many people find fault in what they're reading and the fault is in their own understanding" Al Mutanabbi