A paining hurt and a Healing Lord...
Dedicated to: Suhail (for helping me out with the rhyming words! Thanxz)
My ink is running wild on the paper,
My eyes are flooding with tears
It’s almost as though, the pain in my heart is afraid to face its fears.
I can’t see what I’m writing,
And my paper is covered in blotches
The candle that is lit by my side
Seems not to recognise my bruises
Its wit is wilted and black
As for me, I feel the same
Can it be that something so sad starts
Tearing your insides, and feeding on your pain.
When my eyes are dried and my tears are long gone
I look down at my paper and see what I have done.
The paper is dark and sweaty from my damp and clammy hands
My pen is wet and slimy from that I can understand.
As I turn out the candle and let my thoughts drift away,
The darkness surrounds me, inviting me to stay
I close my eyes, letting all life’s struggles stream out
Letting them pass as my tears did so, from every ease to every doubt.
I understand the sudden change in the feeling that I feel.
It’s the feeling of love in my heart for The Sublime
Whom with His power, my heart He heals
9 comments
TPOS Fri, 11 Feb 2011 - 23:56
Re: A paining hurt and a Healing Lord...
I know the feeling!
LookingToSee Sat, 12 Feb 2011 - 07:15
Re: A paining hurt and a Healing Lord...
and that horrible feeling is usually our own fault..from sinning...
Valkyrie Sun, 13 Feb 2011 - 10:57
Re: A paining hurt and a Healing Lord...
One Talented Poet
mush91 Thu, 17 Feb 2011 - 19:25
Re: A paining hurt and a Healing Lord...
haha yes im paining just reading that lol
by the way nice poem dude 😃
Nasheedgirl Sat, 19 Feb 2011 - 16:28
Re: A paining hurt and a Healing Lord...
Thank you! 🙂
Hmmm, when i was writing this poem, i was feeling more depressed...but i guess everyone interprets things in different ways!
p.s. dudette...:lol:
p.s.s. the title aint that bad is it!?!
mush91 Sun, 20 Feb 2011 - 23:32
Re: A paining hurt and a Healing Lord...
ermmm....well...ermmm.....nah lol
it dont sound right to be honest but thats the good thing about it
the best poems and titles are the ones that make sense to you 🙂
Suhail (not verified) Mon, 21 Feb 2011 - 03:42
Re: A paining hurt and a Healing Lord...
o just read this now, thnx for the dedication and nice poem, can really empathise with it.
Nasheedgirl Mon, 21 Feb 2011 - 12:26
Re: A paining hurt and a Healing Lord...
Lol! thats cool then..at least i have an xplanation now as to y my title dont mke sense! 🙂
Nasheedgirl Mon, 21 Feb 2011 - 12:27
Re: A paining hurt and a Healing Lord...
ur welcome...sometimes u just cant think of the ryt wrds and u need sme help..thank you! 😉
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