God loves me
When I needed money,
He provided me with a job.
When I wanted to waste money,
He provided me with expenses.
When I was tempted,
He provided me with strength.
When those temptations became strong,
He allowed me to stay at home.
When I prayed for the strength to forgive,
He gave me a front seat view on the evils of revenge
Yet with all this I still did not act
or follow all that was commanded of me
God gave me a chance to gain forgiveness and mercy
and He still keeps giving me opportunity
For God loves me.
Re: God loves me
Truth's_Razors — Mon, 8 Feb 2010 - 18:14
Did you write this?
Re: God loves me
You — Mon, 8 Feb 2010 - 18:15
Yes, it's an original.
Re: God loves me
RI_RS — Mon, 8 Feb 2010 - 19:07
Aw'h :]
Re: God loves me
You — Tue, 9 Feb 2010 - 02:51
Thanks everyone - I had no idea how it would be received.
I was to add that the words are talking about real events and scenarios - not made up with phony events or anything, but real life stuff. (I often find the use of made up events in such things to feel dishonest to me.)
Re: God loves me
s.b.f — Mon, 15 Feb 2010 - 01:03
1. Where did you get the idea to write a poem?
2. How long did it take to write?
I liked it 😃
Re: God loves me
s.b.f — Mon, 15 Feb 2010 - 01:03
?
Re: God loves me
You — Mon, 15 Feb 2010 - 01:07
erm... I was going to write something but this popped up into my head. and like 2 mins I guess.
It wasn't meant to be a poem initially, but then I thought it had a rhyme, broke the lines up and it was there. just had to make a change or two.
In my defence, I was in a good mood.
Re: God loves me
Truth's_Razors — Mon, 15 Feb 2010 - 23:38
That is totally how some of the poems i write start out!
Re: God loves me
TPOS — Fri, 24 Dec 2010 - 22:15
God loves me too, are you jealous? 😛
I liked it btw 🙂
Truth's_Razor this poem is tagged as a contest...you should add yours up here 🙂
Re: God loves me
Truth's_Razors — Thu, 18 Feb 2010 - 15:58
Lol, I might just do that!
Re: God loves me
TPOS — Thu, 18 Feb 2010 - 22:39
i look forward to it 🙂