Islam is ACE

Islam is ACE!

People stare at me all the time,
Because of the things I wear,
Like I’ve just committed a crime
But merely for covering my hair

They walk around in mini skirts,
And see no problem with it,
Chests revealed with their tight shirts
And clothes that are made to fit.

and when I see them dressed like this
it makes me sad inside
because of the blessing that they have missed,
because they’ve had no guide

yet me, I’m a Muslim
and they look down at me
thinking that my life is grim
that I am never free

my heart glows inside me
there’s a smile on my face
with them I’ll have to disagree
because Islam is ACE!

sumaiya fatine

what do you think?

heres another of my poems,
i wrote it for a comeptiton, but lost, its about battery farming.

A longing for freedom

The cage closed in around me,
my voice silent to Them
and how I long to be free,
and not inside this pen.

The amount of eggs I’ve laid,
I can’t even recall,
and to think I don’t get paid,
by Them, the ones who rule.

If only I could go outside,
or even just to see,
the grass plains, far and wide,
I dream of being free.

thanks guys, but its not that good.

heres another of my poems, i wrote it for a comeptiton, but lost, its about battery farming.

A longing for freedom

The cage closed in around me,
my voice silent to Them
and how I long to be free,
and not inside this pen.

The amount of eggs I’ve laid,
I can’t even recall,
and to think I don’t get paid,
by Them, the ones who rule.

If only I could go outside,
or even just to see,
the grass plains, far and wide,
I dream of being free.