for some reason it worked now...i knew i was logged in..have been on googlemail alot today..
anyway, can you put the music down a bit? really cant here Ed talking...
and the end. when you have "the revival voice of the muslim youth" all on one line, can you try "THE REVIVAL and then underneath Voice of the Muslim Youth"?
and last one. " a one man mission...WILL REVIVE A GENERATION"
how about "a one man mission... TO REVIVE A GENERATION"
thats just typo wise but while typing the above i realised... ITS NOT A ONE MAN MISSION!!!!!
can we have a theme like that for REvvy? it looks amAHzing. *_*
Is it true? Is it kind? Is it necessary?
Coool Stuff!! Hope it goes well iA! :)
I dunno if you want feedback since its only a teaser and has already been published buuutt:
- I think it sounds better as: "Sajid Iqbal...Editor of The Revival" rather than "The Editor" ...repitition of "The" and all that...
- Could you not zoom across the whole 'The Revival' header? I know iMovie has set time limits for the shots (also prob why the Salaam is a little cut off) but I thnk you need the full logo in.
- Yeahh, the 'one man' thing..it doesnt seem very 'uniting' and it won't fit well if you do get other speakers to talk in future videos...and yes, the music drowns the speech alot after the intro.
And this is really nitty gritty but there's the 0:53 jump-cut glitch.
iMovie has alot of limitations unfortunately. It wouldnt let me turn down the music or increase the length of certain clips. But the teaser trailer was just a bit of fun. We didnt plan it or anything. It was totally random how i was able to throw it together. I just thought it would look cool as a one off.
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it does look cool. the feedback was just how to make it look cool-er IF it was to be something serious that needed further development.
I actually like it quite a bit. It was so much better than i thought it would be. Ed is actually funny. Just really funny. Take a look at his actions and they speak for themselves. Looking forward to the next one!
I don't think having the sounds louder than TheRevivalEditor's voice is much of a problem at this stage - its the 'before' the actual thing, so its giving a taster. I'm very sure that won't be happening in the next video anyway.
Yup yup.. I know what you mean...for iMovie trailers, most of the settings are in default and cant be changed.
I like video editing (dont do anything more than iMovie lol) so just thought I'd give my suggestions. For more advanced chiz, (which prob wont be needed cos its just vlogging), Final Cut Pro is a very cool video editing software used by loadsa YouTubers.
And it is cool and fun mA jA for sharing!
Looks very mission impossibly.
And I heard as it were, the noise of thunder. One of the four beasts saying come and see and I beheld, a pale horse. And his name that sat on him was Death... and Hell followed with him.
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