God, can you hear me calling?

Published by Seraphim on 28 June, 2010 - 23:57

God can you hear me calling?
I need you here tonight.
Im all alone and shaking,
Coz nothing seems to go right,
Just a few more hours
and it will be Fajhr time soon
I think i might wait up
Oh, God what can I do
What can I do?

You say theres only one path
That your house is my home too
But my heart is always somewhere else
And thats why you've left me alone.

Just a few more hours
And it'll be Fajhr time soon
God, can you hear me callin'
Oh God what can i do
What can I do?

God, I know Ive done wrong,
And Im not your favourite tonight,
But I hope you'll forgive me some day,
Even if you take my life away...

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poetry

Comments

Submitted by s.b.f on 29 June, 2010 - 23:28

Like.

It was cool inspiration for me this morning.

You have no idea.

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Submitted by Seraphim on 30 June, 2010 - 13:58

Thanks sully,

Anythng to help the lil ppl Wink

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Submitted by TPOS on 30 June, 2010 - 17:41

inspiration? :S it sounds all depressing to me:/
for some reason i really like the title though Smile
and lol @ "the lil ppl"

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Submitted by You on 4 July, 2010 - 13:38

Battles normally have victories where things are supposed to be easier after them.

Wars are not supposed to be constant, but they (and their consequences) can last an awful long time.

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Submitted by You on 4 July, 2010 - 13:47

naah, the next time you have a different war in different circumstances.

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"For too long, we have been a passively tolerant society, saying to our citizens 'as long as you obey the law, we will leave you alone'" - David Cameron, UK Prime Minister. 13 May 2015.

Submitted by Ya'qub on 6 July, 2010 - 16:33

Ocean wrote:

is life all about learning from mistake and building yourself against it? because if it is, it's quite boring and limited

but... but... but...
what about the smile on a new-born babies face? and sunsets? and all of God's beautiful Creation for us to admire?

Life is NOT boring... and CERTAINLY not limited...

There are only boring and limited people. Stop listening to them and letting them tell you what to do!

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Submitted by You on 6 July, 2010 - 20:58

I thought I had read or hears somewhere that a new born baby does not smile for either 20 days or 20 weeks or something...

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"For too long, we have been a passively tolerant society, saying to our citizens 'as long as you obey the law, we will leave you alone'" - David Cameron, UK Prime Minister. 13 May 2015.

Submitted by s.b.f on 6 July, 2010 - 22:47

Ya'qub wrote:

Life is NOT boring... and CERTAINLY not limited...

La-la-la

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Submitted by TPOS on 23 August, 2010 - 23:58

ThE pOwEr Of SiLeNcE wrote:
inspiration? :S it sounds all depressing to me:/
for some reason i really like the title though Smile
and lol @ "the lil ppl"

changed my mind. *like* Smile

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"How many people find fault in what they're reading and the fault is in their own understanding" Al Mutanabbi

Submitted by Seraphim on 24 August, 2010 - 14:58

ThE pOwEr Of SiLeNcE wrote:
ThE pOwEr Of SiLeNcE wrote:
inspiration? :S it sounds all depressing to me:/
for some reason i really like the title though Smile
and lol @ "the lil ppl"

changed my mind. *like* Smile

How come you changed your mind? Smile

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Submitted by TPOS on 24 August, 2010 - 15:00

I am in a different state of mind now, was probably better before!

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"How many people find fault in what they're reading and the fault is in their own understanding" Al Mutanabbi