Why you spitting rhymes that are misguiding my generation?

my pen writes when im depressed because i never slept,
Regreting every time there was a promise that i never kept.
Wake up on a morning, see the same world, the same hate.
Stay up every night writing so that it gets late,
Thoughts fill my mind build a maze in my own head,
I can't sleep anywhere not even in my own bed
Every way i look i see the end of something i beleive,
But i carry on because i said that i would never leave,
Flows, fill my head so i write it out upon a page,
i dont see many true people around in this day and age,
Rappers come around and show the youth how to end up caged,
But you won't ever see me with them standin on a stage,
Tell me what you beleive to be the hip hop that u know?
Trust true hip hop was never about the hoes or the doe.
Lowkey said it, he's sicker so he spread it,
Spoke the truth, i saw it ona page so i went an read it.
Listened to it after it was spat on a track,
Realised i didnt know real hip hop it was a fact.

Lil wayne, kissed a man he called baby and daddy,
Does anybody else beleive that to be sickly and madly.
I spit these rhymes because i wanaa see a change,
Change the ways that they keep the truth out of range.
Music's an influence on everybody in some way.
With me it hit me hard so its something i display.
As a young kid it influenced everything i did,
Still a teenager music built a wall and behind it i hid,
I was like the other youths, blind and naive.
Trusting every word i heard spat and i could see.
Then i dug deeper,this was wild it wasn't rightt.
Circumstances in life lead to me wanting to fight.
what these rapper on the tv were telling the youth.
It wasn't even right, not logical, no truth.
Logic was a true man, Lowkey spit his heart out.
The truth was the truth there was something about.

Took me by suprise, my outlook took a new turn
Rappers spitting truth influenced evrything i learnt.
Maybe.it was wrong, but it got me on the right path,
Back to the right place like following a footpath.
Praying my salah, and practising islaam,
the key to my anger it's what kept me calm.
In the long run my life will be insignificant,
But if i could change one view it would be signifcant,
Because inoe how it affects the youth of today,
As far as even changing every word that they say.
I could spit all day, no difference would be made,
I guess there'll be a day wen my talent starts to fade.
But if one person understood what it is that i say,
Then i wud be proud i changed the world in a way.
Start a revoloution and fight for the truth.
Stop music's wrong take, from misguiding the youth.

A little something i wrote. inspired by Lowkey.

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How long does it take you to get these written?

"For too long, we have been a passively tolerant society, saying to our citizens 'as long as you obey the law, we will leave you alone'" - David Cameron, UK Prime Minister. 13 May 2015.

around ten to fifteen minutes. sometimes not as long. sometimes longer. depends

 

"Lil wayne, kissed a man he called baby and daddy"

Pardon? :S

#Before you look at the thorns of the rose , look at it's beauty. Before you complain about the heat of the sun , enjoy it's light. Before you complain about the blackness of the night, think of it's peace and quiet... #

yup he did.
but i'm not sure where,
quoted lowkey on that.

 

Nice Post I already digged this

nice lyrics ,,really gd

Exception wrote:
around ten to fifteen minutes. sometimes not as long. sometimes longer. depends

But surely they must be in your head for hours before hand simply cooking up?

"For too long, we have been a passively tolerant society, saying to our citizens 'as long as you obey the law, we will leave you alone'" - David Cameron, UK Prime Minister. 13 May 2015.

yeah they are in my head, it takes a while to sort out my thoughts,
but when i hit the paper or a keyboard.
it doesnt take long,

and thankyou

 

Lame

Anonymous12 wrote:
Lame

not really...maybe u just don't understand.

i guess everybody has their own opinion

 

yo man im a wiked rapper but i need some fresh bars u get wha im sayin all mines are old i got lodz but i need some more

u get me blood do u tink u cound jot me down some bars im askin u blood coz urs are wiked man i like what i c

so if i could write me some rapper 2 rapper

send dem to :

mebi getz som inglish lessns init . . ! :idea: